Some people suggest that young adults should be encouraged to do some unpaid work for a period of time for the community to help people. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?
二、解析
文章类型 : agree or disagree
重点单词:young adults / be encouraged to do some unpaid work for community / benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people
●优点1:有助于社区的兴旺发展(be beneficial to the prosperity of the community)
------年轻人做一些-的社区服务,例如修剪草坪(mow the lawn),清洁分类垃圾(clean and sort rubbish),社区不需要支付这些服务所产生的费用(no need to pay for the expenses caused by such service),节约下来的钱可以用在改善社区的其他的方面(the saved money could be used to improve other aspects of community),例如建立娱乐活动中心(set up leisure center)
●优点2:培养年轻人的责任感(cultivate young people's sense of responsibility)
------在这个-劳动的过程中,年轻人可以意识到自己的价值和对社会的贡献(realize the values and contributions to the society),在未来的工作和生活中,更愿意做一些志愿者活动去帮助别人(are willing to do volunteer work to help others)
Body 3:
●缺点1: 年轻人很难得到放松和休息(difficult for them to relax and rest)
------年轻人工作日要工作和学习(be busy with work or study at weekdays), 周末还要做社区服务(do community service at weekend),没有时间去休息和娱乐(have no time to rest and entertain), 会感觉到很累和疲惫(feel tired and exhausted)
●反驳: 社区服务中可以和老年人聊天(chat with the elderly),陪孩子一起做游戏(play games with children),带来很多的欢乐和开心(bring about much delight and pleasure), 也是一种很好的放松方式(an effective way to relax)